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  1. Narts

    Well looks like it turned out quite nice in the end. There is something about the composition I still don’t like but it’s hard to point a finger on anything that’s obviously wrong about it. I think it’s just because there really isn’t much to look at other than the person doing the jump kick and she’s kind of small compared to all the empty space around her. It may also be that fact that the yin and yang still isn’t centered – when there is a single meaningful symbol prominently displayed like this in an image I would expect it to be centered on at least one axis. It’s particularly ironic where the symbol signifies ‘balance’.

    The shading on the pants is quite good and is my favourite part of the painting.

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